Alexander City - Revision history

Silvante: /* Alexander */

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‎Alexander

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‎Alexander

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‎Tranquil Gardens

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 If all three tests are passed the visitor is blessed to enter Alexander as long as their actions within the mortal world do not stain their soul. If the tests are failed they are escorted to the entrance of the Pagoda and given a black shawl to wear. This marks them and bars them from attempting to re-take the tests of purity for one year. After that year is up they may attempt to take the test once more and pass into Alexander.
-Those who are blessed and may enter the great city of Alexander are permitted through the great gates by Guardian and are able to pass into the heart of many tiered Alexander and the wonders, mysteries and powers that reside within.
+Those who are blessed may enter the great city of Alexander are permitted through the great gates by Guardian and are able to pass into the heart of many tiered Alexander and the wonders, mysteries and powers that reside within.
 =====Lost City=====

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 =====Alexander=====
-To enter Alexander a visitor must pass the "Ritual of the Soul" at the Pagoda of Reflection. Anyone approaching the gates of the city without first passing ritual will not gain one entry. Guardian will politely direct the petitioner to the pagoda. Inside the pagoda one mast pass three tests to cleanse body, soul and mind to prove they are of sound and pure thought, intention and deed to enter the Holy City.
+To enter Alexander a visitor must pass the "Ritual of the Soul" at the Pagoda of Reflection. Anyone approaching the gates of the city without first passing ritual will not gain entry. Guardian will politely direct the petitioner to the pagoda. Inside the pagoda one mast pass three tests to cleanse body, soul and mind to prove they are of sound and pure thought, intention and deed to enter the Holy City.
 * They will be led by a silent guide up to the first floor of the Pagoda, a pillar of blue flame fills the centre of the chamber. Bright and brilliant and shining and oh so deadly. Petitioners must step into the flame and pass thruogh to the far side without hue or cry, hesitation or flinching.

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 At each point of the city stands a beautiful gate into Alexander. Each one is guarded by the spirit known simply as Guardian. In his shining blue and silver armour he bars the way to any who would enter at each gate simultaneuosly. To pass Guardian and enter the city mortals must pass the ''Ritual of the Soul'' at the Pagoda of Reflection located in the western gardens.
-Finally if one walks down to the shore of the silver-stream they can look across the swiftly flowing river to the hazy, indistinct landscape of the Lost City. Travellers can swim or perhaps find someone with a boat or swift craft that will transport them to the far side of the river where they can enter leave the shining centre of civilisation behind them and enter the Lost City properly.
+Finally if one walks down to the shore of the silver-stream they can look across the swiftly flowing river to the hazy, indistinct landscape of the Lost City. Travellers can swim or perhaps find someone with a boat or swift craft that will transport them to the far side of the river where they can leave the shining centre of civilisation behind them and enter the Lost City properly.
 =====Alexander=====